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Thursday, 29 November 2018
Thursday, 22 November 2018
Quick Write Gunshots echoed through the valley
Gunshots echoed through the valley, I'm in world war one in 1914 not 2018. I hear my enemy trying to shoot me "aaargh!" I scream. He got me. Then I realize that he shot my friend who is not screaming. "Why aren't you screaming?" I say confused
"Why would I be screaming," He said
"Because you got shot"I kind of shouted
"I never knew I was shot." He said confused
"Did you not hear me scream" I answered back
"I thought that you were shot?" he asked
"No I did that so you would know when to pretend to be dead."
"Can we play something else."
"Sure, we should make a wall."
So we did.
This is my Quick Write and I learnt that for every new speaker they need to go on a different line, and they all need speech marks so that what they are saying is clear. Next time I could have added more detail rather then having a whole bunch of speech in a row.
Friday, 16 November 2018
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