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Thursday, 29 November 2018

Schools nearly over!

Hi it's me again,
It's nearly the end of the school year!  I'm so excited for the holidays. My family is going to Taupo and we are meeting my auntie and uncle there. We are staying there for a week it's going to be so fun. Next week my whole class is presenting our culture club project, I did New Zealand. Culture club is when you get given lots of questions on the country and you have to make a slideshow presentation.  

Everyone is wearing the national costume of their country and bringing the traditional dish. It's going to be like a parade but with a big feast. There is only two and a half weeks left at school. I really want to know what class and what teacher I have for 2019. 2019 is so soon!  


Thursday, 22 November 2018

Quick Write Gunshots echoed through the valley

Gunshots echoed through the valley, I'm in world war one in 1914 not 2018. I hear my enemy trying to shoot me "aaargh!" I scream. He got me. Then I realize that he shot my friend who is not screaming. "Why aren't you screaming?" I say confused

"Why would I be screaming," He said

"Because you got shot"I kind of shouted

"I never knew I was shot." He said confused

"Did you not hear me scream" I answered back

"I thought that you were shot?" he asked

"No I did that so you would know when to pretend to be dead." 

"Can we play something else."

"Sure, we should make a wall."

So we did.


This is my Quick Write and I learnt that for every new speaker they need to go on a different line, and they all need speech marks so that what they are saying is clear. Next time I could have added more detail rather then having a whole bunch of speech in a row.

Friday, 16 November 2018

Halloween poem

Hi again, in class everyone made a halloween poem and this one's mine.